Charlie II

I'm gonna be a maverick: Let's split the group. To be honest, there's so many in Costco now that it's hard to keep track of all the characters. Focusing on ...

Hey wildnaturespirit ! How're you doing? First, a formatting issue or two: paragraphing. Please, please, please paragraph your work. There are guides on how to do this, and you can ...

Maybe I didn't make myself clear. I think that the idea of Sam finding out how Alicia feels about Griffin is a great idea, and I thought it was good ...

Ok, so lets talk about this: Ignoring the spelling, grammar and paragraphing issues, this wasn't a bad piece. You've set up your main character to be a klutz; that's good ...

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6308/1/1. 15:33. Egon Astral Egon smiled at his quarters. He was finally aboard. The guards had let him pass without much fuss, perhaps due to his size. He had managed ...

Day 1. 7:45pm. Bernard. You are a doctor, Bernard. Your actions will determine whether a man can return to his wife and family, or whether his life slips away in ...

6308/1/1. 05:12. Egon Astral (6 hours 18 minutes before the ceremony) As soon as he got near, Egon heard the ship; it sounded big. The morning was early, and the ...

Dear YWS, I regret to inform you that my writing style may be a little unhinged tonight; earlier I consumed an entire box of Roses chocolates, two Terry’s Chocolate Oranges ...

Day 1. 7:23pm. Bernard. "It's not the end of the world." That Spanish voice. Elaina . Bernard turned away from Anne to greet her, but the words must have taken ...

Day 1. 7:20pm. Bernard. Make sure she rests, Bernard. You know, it would be awful if... But, Bernard struggled to remember the consequences. Dr Steinman's voice just trailed off. Incomplete, ...

Thanks, Dreamer and Mabel! I'll give you both return critiques some time. If you PM me the piece you'd like me to review, I'll try and get it done when ...

Yes! *hugs the kind person who used his flag* Charlie

Propaganda -- a message to YWS. Yo. To celebrate the entrance of this new storybook, I spent an obscene amount of time making an ' if you believe in 'x', ...

Military Profile NAME : Astral, Egon ( First name : Egon. Family name : Astral) RACE : Novarian AGE : 31 HEIGHT : 2.31 m WEIGHT : 127 kg EYES ...